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The graphs below show some trends in visits to the UK by overseas residents and visits overseas by UK residents between 1982 and 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.

The first line chart indicates the number of UK residents who went abroad from the UK, and the number of trips from overseas to the UK by foreigners between 1982 and 2002. On the other hand, the second graph provides information about the average length of stay spent by the British and overseas residents in the same time. Overall, it can be seen that the figure of two groups of residents both increased during the whole period, but there is a higher amount of UK citizens traveled abroad than the visitors who came to UK. Conversely, the average length of stay during trips to and from UK between groups in second chart describes a steadily decline. More and more overseas people spend less nights to stay at UK than the other group during their holidays. At the beginning of the period, in 1982, the number of visits abroad from the UK stood at about twenty millions before it rose rapidly and reached its peak at well over fifty millions in 2002. Meanwhile, the figure for outbound visitors to the UK started at around ten millions and then gradually grew to nearly twenty millions for twenty years. Otherwise, it is estimated that the average number of day trips of the UK residents group suffer a slight decrease from roughly thirteen days in 1982 to just over ten days after twenty years. By contrast, there was a slowly drop of three days in spending holidays of foreigners to the end of the period in 2002.

The first
 line chart indicates the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 who went abroad from the UK, and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of trips from overseas to the UK by foreigners between 1982 and 2002. On the other hand
, the second graph provides information about the average length of stay spent by the British and overseas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 in the same time.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the figure of two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 both increased during the whole period, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there is a higher amount of UK citizens traveled abroad than the visitors who came to UK. Conversely
, the average length of stay during trips to and from UK between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 in second chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 a You used an adverb (‘steadily’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘decline’) instead of another adjective.steady decline
steadily decline
. More and more overseas This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spend Did you mean “fewer”? The noun nights is countable.fewer
less
 nights to stay at UK than the other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 during their holidays.

At the beginning of the period, in 1982, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of visits abroad from the UK stood at about twenty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
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before
 it rose rapidly
 and reached its peak at well over fifty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 in 2002. Meanwhile, the figure for outbound visitors to the UK This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at around ten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 and then gradually
 grew to nearly
 twenty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 for twenty years.

Otherwise
, it is estimated
 that the average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of day trips of the UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 suffer a slight decrease from roughly thirteen days in 1982 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over ten days after twenty years. By contrast, there was a You used an adverb (‘slowly’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘drop’) instead of another adjective.slow drop
slowly drop
 of three days in spending holidays of foreigners to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period in 2002. 