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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The illustration describes the process by which how the electricity generated using a geothermal power plant. Overall, it is clear that the production of electricity must go through five main stages from the geothermal power plan starting from cold water to the final stage is in the generator. The cold water accumulated in a container and pumped down to the ground about 4. 5 km deep. After that, it goes to the injection well and the water passes through the geothermal zone underground which contains hot rocks to heat up the cold water and it enters the production well. The hot water then pumped out to the surface and enters the condenser. At this point, the liquid changes to a gas state and it’s pushed inside the turbine which powered by steam. Finally, before the energy channeled to the energy tower, the final stage to produce electricity is it enters generator that powered by the turbine and produces electricity.
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electricity
generated using a geothermal power plant.

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, it is
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clear
that the production of
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electricity
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must
go through five main stages from the geothermal power plan starting from
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cold
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water
to the final stage is in the generator.

The
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cold
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water
accumulated in a container and pumped down to the ground about 4. 5 km deep. After that, it goes to the injection well and the
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water
passes through the geothermal zone underground which contains hot rocks to heat up the
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cold
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water and
it enters the production well. The hot
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water
then pumped out to the surface and enters the condenser.

At this point, the liquid
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changes
to a gas
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state and
it’s pushed inside the turbine which powered by steam.
Finally
,
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before
the energy channeled to the energy tower, the final stage to produce
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electricity
is it enters generator that powered by the turbine and produces
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electricity
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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4 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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