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The diagram below represents the “Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011”. Summarise the information given in the diagrams. Write at least 150 words.

The following diagram represents the comparison between the urban consumption of chinese in 1995 and 2011. Chinese spent 8. 0% for their residence in 1995 while the spending rate increased 1% that is 9. 0% in 2011, on the other hand they have spent 2% more on education in 2011. Furthermore looking upon the food consumption chinese have cut off 14% food consumption in 2011 which was 50% in 1995. House hold facilities remained same between 1995 and 2011 that is 7. 0%. As the need for medical supply increased due to the evaluation of different diseases the rate of consumption of medicine also increased from 3. 0% to 7. 0%. The transportation is a marked sector which have grew to a wider margin from 5. 0% to 14. 0%. Chinese have also reduced their spending on clothing for 3%. The overall statistics does not show a huge difference in consumption rate fron 1995 to 2011.
The following diagram represents the comparison between the urban
consumption
of
chinese
in 1995 and 2011.

Chinese spent 8. 0% for their residence in 1995 while the spending rate increased 1%
that is
9. 0% in 2011,
on the other hand
they have spent 2% more on education in 2011.
Furthermore
looking upon the food
consumption
chinese
have
cut
off 14% food
consumption
in 2011 which was 50% in 1995.
House hold
facilities remained same between 1995 and 2011
that is
7. 0%. As the need for medical supply increased due to the evaluation of
different
diseases the rate of
consumption
of medicine
also
increased from 3. 0% to 7. 0%. The transportation is a marked sector which have
grew
to a wider margin from 5. 0% to 14. 0%. Chinese have
also
reduced
their spending on clothing for 3%.

The
overall
statistics does not
show
a huge difference in
consumption
rate
fron
1995 to 2011.
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IELTS academic The diagram below represents the “Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011”.

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