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The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes)in 2012 .summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes)in 2012. nYQ2
The given bar charts illustrate compare the top three countries importing different types of citrus fruits in 2012. The fruits are given orange, lemons, grapefruit and all others citrus fruits. Overall, it is clear that among the given countries, Mexico has highest in lemons and all others fruits. While, in United States lemons and grapefruit on trend and declined in all others fruits. In orange the south Africa has 1020 thousands tonnes in countries. Egypt has 500 thousands tones. while in United States lemons and orange, exporting lemons is twice then orange in lemons Mexico city was in trend and Argentina was very less around 100 in thousands tonnes. Over the last two graphs grapefruit and all other citrus fruits. In both Mexico exporting was 300 and 500 in thousands tone. United States grapefruit is more than others around 200 and others was 20. turkey was nearly 400 imported while others citrus fruits Egypt imported 20 were less amount of thousands tonnes.
The
given
bar charts illustrate compare the top three countries importing
different
types of citrus
fruits
in 2012. The
fruits
are
given
orange, lemons, grapefruit and all others citrus
fruits
.
Overall
, it is
clear
that among the
given
countries, Mexico has highest in lemons and all others
fruits
. While, in United States lemons and grapefruit on trend and declined in all others
fruits
. In orange the
south Africa
has 1020 thousands tonnes in countries. Egypt has 500 thousands tones.
while
in United States lemons and orange, exporting lemons is twice then orange in lemons
Mexico city
was in trend and Argentina was
very
less around 100 in thousands tonnes. Over the last two graphs grapefruit and all
other
citrus
fruits
. In both Mexico exporting was 300 and 500 in thousands tone. United States grapefruit is more than others around 200
and others
was 20.
turkey
was
nearly
400 imported while others citrus
fruits
Egypt imported 20 were less amount of thousands tonnes.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes)in 2012.

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