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The chart below shows three different types of crime in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows three different types of crime in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005. woRN
The provided line graph illustrates proportion in million of numbers about car theft, house burglary and street robbery in England & Wales, during 1970 to 2005. Overall, during the entire period, in both nations' car theft ratio was on highest level compare with other two crimes. While, Street robbery was on least level, which started from 1995. According to given data, in 1970 around 0. 4 million car theft's cases registered in England and Wales, which was doubled over the decade. In following period it was surged significantly and in 1995 it was on peek level, with 1. 6 million car theft cases. Whereas, in last 15 years it was fall dramatically and in 2005 there were 1 million cases of car theft recorded. As per data of remaining crimes, House burglary crime rate was on half level compare to car theft in beginning period, which was at 0. 2 million in 1970. In next decade it was escalated by thrice, which was 0. 6 million in 1980. Than after, until 2005 this ratio was fluctuated around this level. However, there were 0 crime rate for street robbery until 1990, then after it was started with mere cases, over the period it was at just 0. 2 million cases.
The provided line graph illustrates proportion in
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million
of numbers about
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car
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theft
,
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house
burglary and street robbery in England & Wales, during 1970 to 2005.
Overall
, during the entire
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period
, in both nations'
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car
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theft
ratio was on highest
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level
compare with other two
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crimes
. While, Street robbery was on least
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level
, which
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started
from 1995.

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data, in 1970 around 0. 4
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million
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car
theft's cases registered in England and Wales, which
was doubled
over the decade. In following
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period
it
was surged
significantly
and in 1995 it was on peek
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level
, with 1. 6
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million
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car
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theft
cases. Whereas, in last 15 years it was fall
dramatically
and in 2005 there were 1
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million
cases of
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car
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theft
recorded.

As per data of remaining
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crimes
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House
burglary
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crime
rate was on half
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level
compare to
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car
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theft
in beginning
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period
, which was at 0. 2
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million
in 1970. In
next
decade it
was escalated
by thrice, which was 0. 6
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million
in 1980.
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Than
after, until 2005 this ratio
was fluctuated
around this
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level
.
However
, there were 0
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crime
rate for street robbery until 1990, then after it was
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started
with mere cases, over the
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period
it was at
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0. 2
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cases.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows three different types of crime in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005.

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