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The graphs below describes the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below describes the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. NrPnq
The graph below shows (displays, describes, illustrates) the States with a significant rank of winning medals in the winter and summer Olympics over the entire period. The first graph shows the types of medals for each country (gold, silver, and bronze), compared to the other graph, where this is not marked. Norway has collected almost 400 medals of various types during the winter Olympics, becoming the leader. Gold, silver, and bronze were collected in almost the same number, varying from 150 to 200 medals for one of the metals. The United States managed to achieve success, locating itself on the 2nd place according to the number of medals taken, totaling just over 300 medals for the entire period. Germany is placed in 3rd place, a little short of 250. In comparison with the leading countries, Russia and Canada have accumulated an almost equal number of medals, (about) 200 approximately. At the summer Olympics, the United States scored exactly 2, 500 medals all-time, becoming the leader. Russia and Germany scored virtually the same number of medals (approximately 2000 medals), but Russia placed itself in second place. Great Britain and France, in their case/turn, have gained almost the same number of medals (approximately 1000).
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describes
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medals
in the winter and summer Olympics over the entire period. The
first
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shows
the types of
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medals
for each country (gold, silver, and bronze), compared to the other graph, where this is not marked.

Norway has collected
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almost
400
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medals
of various types during the winter Olympics, becoming the leader. Gold, silver, and bronze
were collected
in
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almost
the same
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number
, varying from 150 to 200
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medals
for one of the metals.

The United States managed to achieve success, locating itself on the 2nd place according to the
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number
of
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medals
taken, totaling
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just
over 300
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medals
for the entire period. Germany
is placed
in 3rd place, a
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little
short of 250.
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with the leading countries, Russia and Canada have accumulated an
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almost
equal
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number
of
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medals
, (about) 200 approximately.

At the summer Olympics, the United States scored exactly 2, 500
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medals
all-time, becoming the leader. Russia and Germany scored
virtually
the same
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number
of
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medals
(approximately 2000
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,
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Russia placed itself in second place. Great Britain and France, in their case/turn, have gained
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almost
the same
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number
of
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medals
(approximately 1000).
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IELTS academic The graphs below describes the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics.

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