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The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. RNl6W
the above diagram illustrates the 4 different outcomes of deforestation and how they impact the environment. Every impact of the outcome results in severe environmental issues. Overall, we can observe that burning of trees possess highest threat to the environment which leads to loss of biodiversity on the other hand reductions of roots contributes least amount of risk to environment. Let’s deeply analyze the different causes one by one and how it adversely effects the environment. The heavy equipment used in order to collect the logs of tree’s results to soil compression. Due to compression, the soil loses it fertility transforms into an hard and baked version of soil. In the raining season or when there is excess flow of water the areas are prone to environment threat of flooding. The permanent removal of trees can damage the roots as the soil becomes less resistant can ultimately lead to erosion of top soil. Another manifestation of deforestation such as deliberate or accidental burning of trees could destroy the other logs and results in wastage of wood. The micro-organisms that are fed on the burned ashes of wasted wood, would harm the ecosystem as the pioneer species make their way to the barren island which results in loss of biodiversity. the plants that are regrown in the deforested areas are not strong enough to withstand the air as they have less moisture. the lower moisture leads to limited precipitation and eventually causes drought.
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above diagram illustrates the 4
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different
outcomes of deforestation and how they impact the
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environment
. Every impact of the outcome
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results
in severe environmental issues.

Overall
, we can observe that burning of
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trees
possess
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highest
threat to the
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environment
which leads to loss of biodiversity
on the other hand
reductions of roots contributes
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amount of
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risk
to environment.

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deeply
analyze the
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different
causes one by one and how it
adversely
effects the
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environment
. The heavy equipment
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used
in order to collect the logs of
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tree’s
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results
to
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soil
compression. Due to compression, the
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soil
loses it fertility transforms into
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an
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hard
and baked version of
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soil
. In the raining season or when there is excess flow of water the areas are prone to
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environment
threat of flooding. The permanent removal of
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trees
can damage the roots as the
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soil
becomes less resistant can
ultimately
lead to erosion of top soil.

Another manifestation of deforestation such as deliberate or accidental burning of
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trees
could
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destroy
the other logs and
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results
in wastage of wood. The micro-organisms that
are fed
on the burned ashes of wasted wood, would harm the ecosystem as the pioneer species
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make
their way to the barren island which
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results
in loss of biodiversity.
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the
plants that are regrown in the deforested areas are not strong
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enough
to withstand the air as they have less moisture.
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the
lower moisture leads to limited precipitation and
eventually
causes drought.
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