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The bar chart demonstrates the amounts of men and women who study six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

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The bar chart demonstrates the amounts of men and women who study six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Overall, English language and literature was the most populer subject. On the other hand, among men, one chosing philosopy were at the lowest rate, while the lowest amount of women attented history and archeology. Linguistic, Language and Literature and Communication and Media stud were the most populer field with nearly same proportion. Women wanted to participate English and literature most. Likewise, men did so. 250 women took part in English language and Literature. As for men, there were just over 250 attendant in English language and Literature. By contrast, figures for Philosophy and History and Archeology saw the smallest proportion of participants. Men participating in Philosophy were just 50 people. But, women were threefold of men who learn Philosophy. When it comes to History and Archeology, women and men studying this subject had virtually the same amount of the figures.
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who study six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

Overall
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language
and
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was the most
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men
, one
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philosopy
were at the lowest rate, while the lowest amount of
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attented
history and archeology.

Linguistic,
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Language
and
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Literature
and Communication and Media stud were the most
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populer
field with
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same proportion.
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Women
wanted to participate English and
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literature
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men
did
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. 250
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in English
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. As for
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, there were
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over 250 attendant in English
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and Literature.

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the smallest proportion of participants.
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participating in Philosophy were
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were threefold of
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who learn Philosophy. When it
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to History and Archeology,
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women
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studying this subject had
virtually
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IELTS academic The bar chart demonstrates the amounts of men and women who study six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

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