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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the year 2002 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featured.

This bar graph represents the information about the total percentage of citizens who are owning computers. It indicates the data of eight years from 2002 to 2010. The second graph gives the data of group of individuals who are owning computers or academic purpose First, highest number of computers were purchased in 2010 that is around 75% and the least obtained was the least obtained was in 2002 that is 58% It can be clearly understood from the graph that there is a significant increase in the possession of computers over a period o time. This pretty much shows that humans are get more dependent n technology with the growing time. The most noticable feature is the ownership of computers by students at different level of education showing the chart. The usage of computers was mostly done by the post graduates in 2002 and the less holdings was with the high school students. The situation was same in 2010 as well. 90% of the master program students owned computer while only 40% of the high school students had PCs. So from this, it can be said that the need of computer rises with the degree of qualification.
This bar graph represents the information about the total percentage of citizens who
are owning
computers. It indicates the data of eight years from 2002 to 2010. The second graph gives the data of group of individuals who
are owning
computers or academic
purpose


First
,
highest
number of computers were
purchased
in 2010
that is
around 75% and the least obtained was the least obtained was in 2002
that is
58% It can be
clearly
understood from the graph that there is a significant increase in the possession of computers over a period o time. This pretty
much
shows
that humans are
get
more dependent n technology with the growing time.

The most
noticable
feature is the ownership of computers by
students
at
different
level of education showing the chart. The usage of computers was
mostly
done by the post graduates in 2002 and the
less
holdings was with the high school
students
. The situation was same in 2010
as well
. 90% of the master program
students
owned
computer while
only
40% of the high school
students
had PCs.
So
from this, it can
be said
that the need of computer rises with the degree of qualification.
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IELTS academic The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the year 2002 and 2010.

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