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The diagram below shows how concentrated apple juice is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Various stages involved in the production of concentrated apple juice on a commercial basis are sequenced in the given diagram. Overall, it is clear that of the eleven stages, the three crucial stages are centrifuging, filtration and pasteurization. The process begins with the selection and harvesting of the best apples. These apples are passed for washing and sorting via the receiving belt. The washed, good quality apples are then transferred to the apple grinder, and the ground apples are collected in a large container before channeling it to the pressing machine. In the pressing machine, centrifuging, one of the key process happens. Here, water from the apple concentration is separated. Then, aroma is added to the concentration, and this happens in three stages in air tight containers. The next two crucial stages are filtration, followed by pasteurization of the concentrate at 80°C. The post-pasteurized concentrate is filled in individual bottles prior to the processes of packing and delivery.

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 juice on a commercial basis are sequenced
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given
 diagram.

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clear
 that of the eleven You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
, the three crucial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 are centrifuging, filtration and pasteurization. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
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apples
. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworldasteroid
apples
are passed
 for washing and sorting via the receiving belt. The washed, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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apples
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apple
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apples
are collected
 in a large container This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 channeling it to the pressing machine.

In the pressing machine, centrifuging, one of the key process happens. Here, water from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it witholiveblue-green
apple
 concentration is separated
. Then, aroma is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the concentration, and this happens in three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 in air tight containers.

The next
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stages
 are filtration, followed by pasteurization of the concentrate at Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "80 °C"80 °C
80°C
. The post-pasteurized concentrate is filled
 in individual bottles prior to the processes of packing and delivery. 