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The graph together cover five decades and the sales are measured in pounds sterling.

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The rendered line graph illustrates the sales of distinct music and measuring it in billions in england. Overall, A a myopic look at the graph that the higest trend was witnessd in the sale of pop music whereas the sale of classical music observed with downward trend throughout the given Period. However, The Rock music was seen with indentical pattern in the initial year while after the two decades it showed with downward trend. It is evident from the graph that, The sale of the pop music was on the dominant Position throughout the given period of time. However, In 1960s The sale of pop music was comprised with 2. 5 billions. After that, this number of sale inclined slighly which had been reached up to 3 billion till 1970. Moreover, the sale of Pop music had been incline Continuously over next three decades which peaked on it's all time high at 5 billion. Furthermore, the sale of Rock music was witnessed with 2. 5 billion as the Pole music is the initial period whereas there had been a steady decrease manifested at 4. 5 billion. Moving further, After a two decades the number of sales had been seen with downward trend which stood at 3. 5 billion. In contrast, The sale of classical music was stagnated in the initials years Whilst A moderate decline had been seen in the sale of classical music from 1970 to1980. However, this number had been Gradually increase in the end of the 1990's.

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