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The given two maps illustrate, how the stokeford was totally transformed In 80 years.

The given two maps illustrate, how the stokeford was totally transformed In 80 years. yDKgl
Overall, the post office as well as River Stoke remained the same. Even though, From north to South Road runs from the village and bridge stays unchanged. In south side, Farm land was Made into a Row houses which having River view and roads are connected to each houses. In the Eastern side of Stokeland, gardens and large house was pulled down and Retirement home were builted and in front side and back side of a house is covered with a trees. In 1930, west side of a River bank, there are two Shops which was turned in Houses and directly connects to the main road. opposite of post office, primary School was Expended and after this, more residential Area was Erected. Through Roads, each and every side of a village is linked each other.
Overall
, the post office
as well
as River Stoke remained the same.
Even though
, From north to South
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Road
runs from the village and bridge stays unchanged. In south side, Farm land
was Made
into a Row
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houses
which having River view and
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roads
are connected
to each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "house"?
houses
. In the Eastern side of
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Stokeland
, gardens and large
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house
was pulled
down and Retirement home were
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builted
and in front side and back side of a
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house
is covered
with
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a tree" or simply "trees"?
a trees
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
1930, west side of a River bank, there are two Shops which
was turned
in
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Houses
and
directly
connects to the main
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road
.
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opposite
of post office, primary School
was Expended
and after this, more residential Area
was Erected
. Through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Roads
, each and every side of a village
is linked
each other.
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IELTS academic The given two maps illustrate, how the stokeford was totally transformed In 80 years.

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