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Mixed table and pie chart

Mixed table and pie chart PE9EB
The pie chart and the table give information about the kind of jobs which graduated students of Anthropology University did and pay scale they received in three occupational groups: Freelance consultants, Government sector and Private companies after five years’ work. Overall, the majority of graduates chose full- time work after finishing the course while very few people continued studying and worked part-time. Besides, as can be seen, the proportion of freelancers who had the high salaries was the most common. There were more than half of the workers who did full-time, the others were not much. Followed by part-time accounting for 15% was the data of unemployed. Meanwhile, full-time postgraduate study just had 8%, that was equal to the figure for not knowing.
The pie chart and the table give information about the kind of jobs which graduated students of Anthropology University did and pay scale they received in three occupational groups: Freelance consultants,
Government
sector and Private
companies
after five years’ work.

Overall
, the majority of graduates chose full- time work after finishing the course while
very
few
people
continued studying and worked part-time.
Besides
, as can be
seen
, the proportion of freelancers who had the high salaries was the most common.

There were more than half of the workers who did full-time, the others were not much. Followed by part-time accounting for 15% was the data of unemployed. Meanwhile, full-time postgraduate study
just
had 8%, that was equal to the figure for not knowing.
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IELTS academic Mixed table and pie chart

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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