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Changes that took place in in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period

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The map shows the developments which took place in Youngsville in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005. In 1980, the town was much greener, full of trees, and individual houses but after several years, town facilities has changed. The main fact is that most of the trees were cut down in the living area, but not only this is the problem but also instead of houses, there are many skyscrapers and warehouses. It is worth pointing out that in the park, in 2005 there are much fewer trees than it was in 1980, and it is one of the biggest problems during 25 years. Overall, it is clear that these two maps are completely opposite. Comparing them we can see that the urban landscape changed into a largely rural place.
The map
shows
the developments which took place in
Youngsville
in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005.

In 1980, the town was much greener, full of trees, and individual
houses
but
after several years, town facilities has
changed
. The main fact is that most of the trees were
cut
down in the living area,
but
not
only
this is the problem
but
also
instead
of
houses
, there are
many
skyscrapers and warehouses.

It is worth pointing out that in the park, in 2005 there are much fewer trees than it was in 1980, and it is one of the biggest problems during 25 years.

Overall
, it is
clear
that these two maps are completely opposite. Comparing them we can
see
that the urban landscape
changed
into a
largely
rural place.
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IELTS academic Changes that took place in in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period

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  American English
4 paragraphs
130 words
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