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Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level . However , some say that individuals should pay for university education . Do you agree or disagree give your opinion.

People have different view about tuition fees. While a number of individuals believe that the government is responsible for free education, some argue that the fees of tertiary education must be paid by themselves. This essay will not only discuss these divergent views but my opinion also be highlighted while concluding it. On the one hand, there are several reasons why government should support financially students. Firstly, the lack of knowledge which gained in high education facilities will be major cause of unemployment. In fact because of the unemployment rate the criminality in cities increasing day by day and this is a highly controversial issue among the authorities. For example, the statistical analysis shows that the Korea is in the table of top league about criminals because of the payment for education. Thus, if the government will invest in education system, it would produce benefits for every member of society and they may face less accidents. Secondly, nowadays, we are living in the era of industrial crisis. Indeed a number of parents can't effort their children to universities because of financial instability. In other words, because of the special tax on education golden heads of this country can't gain more prospects and all investors go around the world in order to build career. For instance, the proportion of indian immigrants is 63%, this is becouse highly tax on education system is one key reason to migration.

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