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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. V9O7

The chart illustrates the number of people travel through the underground station in London. Overall, The most number of passengers travel in the morning and evening, meanwhile, the least crowded time is at night. From the chart, it is clear that, It is reported that in the morning most people utilise the service, escpecially, at 7. 00, 400 passengers travel at this time. Whereas, At 10. 00, in the morning, it has reduced to 200. But, in the afternoon, the numbers increased sharply to 300. In the evening, It is specifies that the numbers increased from 100 to around 400 in between 16. 00 and 18. 00. Afterwards, the figure shows that the numbers of passengers use station fell significantly from 18. 00 till 20. 00 in the night where it has decreased from 400 to 100. Although, At 21. 00, It has reported that there is slight increment in the figure, But at mid night, it again fell down to around 150.

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people
 travel through the underground station in London.

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 of passengers travel in the morning and evening, meanwhile, the least crowded time is at night.

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, in the afternoon, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 increased from 100 to around 400 in between 16. 00 and 18. 00. Afterwards, the figure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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 at mid night, it again fell down to around 150. 