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The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012

The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012 GRP2
The line graphs illustrate producing electricity in France over a period of 32 years. It is clear that using nuclear power stayed crucial source of electricty power over the whole given period. Usage of renewables remained negligble source of electricityfrom 1980 to 2012. In 1980, thermal power stations were the main source of electricity production in France, generation about 120 terawatt hours of power. The source of nuclear and hydroelcetic power stations produced just under 75 terawatt of electricty each, while renewables provided less amount of energy. After a year, nuclear power overtook thermal power and became primary source of elctricty. Between 1980 and 2005, nuclear power production hit its peak reaching the highest production of 430 terawatt hours over the period. By contrast, the thermal power prodcution fell to only 50 terawatt and stayed fluctable for the rest of period. Hydroelectric production remained relatively stable, at 50 and 80 terawatt hours, for the whole 32-year period, but renewable electricity production saw only a small rise to approximately 25 terawatt hours by 2012.
The line graphs illustrate producing electricity in France over a
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of 32 years. It is
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that using nuclear
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power
stayed crucial
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source
of
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electricty
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power
over the whole
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given
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period
. Usage of renewables remained
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negligble
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source
of
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electricityfrom
1980 to 2012. In 1980, thermal
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power
stations were the main
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source
of electricity
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production
in France, generation about 120 terawatt
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hours
of
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power
. The
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source
of nuclear and
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hydroelcetic
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power
stations produced
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under 75
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terawatt
of
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electricty
each, while renewables provided less amount of energy. After a year, nuclear
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power
overtook thermal
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power
and became primary
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source
of
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elctricty
. Between 1980 and 2005, nuclear
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power
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production
hit its peak reaching the highest
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production
of 430 terawatt
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hours
over the
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period
. By contrast, the thermal
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power
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prodcution
fell to
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only
50
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terawatt
and stayed
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fluctable
for the rest of
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period
. Hydroelectric
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production
remained
relatively
stable, at 50 and 80 terawatt
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hours
, for the whole 32-year
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,
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but
renewable electricity
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production
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saw
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a
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rise to approximately 25 terawatt
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hours
by 2012.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012

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