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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. N9Qb
The line graph illustrates that the figure of Caribbean Island visitors over a seven years from 2010 to 2017. It is measured by millions of people. Overall, the most significant piece of information to emerge from the graph is that the tourists number increased along the period. The visitors to Caribbean Island was staying either cruise ships or on Island. In 2010, the number of visitors in total was a millions, which approximately 800. 000 of them staying on Island, while the rest staying on cruise ships. The numbers in total increased gradually along the seven years with different pattern of the place where visitors stayed on. 2011 saws a gradually increased in numbers that reached to 250. 000 visitors prefered to stay on Cruise ship, while the others number levelled off at 800. 000. In the following of this year, especially between 2011 and 2013 the quantity of tourists who stayed on Island increased to reached at a 1. 5 million as the numbers stabiled at this situation until was steadily decreased to 1. 3 million and then backed to 1. 5 million. In contrast, the tourists who staying on ship numbers saw fluctuation between 2011 and 2013, but then it increased and peaked at 2 million.
The line graph illustrates that the figure of Caribbean
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over a seven years from 2010 to 2017. It
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millions
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people
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number
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increased
along the period.

The
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visitors
to Caribbean
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Island
was
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staying
either cruise
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ships
or on
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. In 2010, the
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of
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visitors
in total was a
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millions
, which approximately 800. 000 of them
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staying
on
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Island
, while the rest
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on cruise
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ships
. The
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increased
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stayed on. 2011 saws a
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that reached to 250. 000
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to stay on Cruise
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levelled off at 800. 000. In the following of this year,
especially
between 2011 and 2013 the quantity of tourists who stayed on
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increased
to reached at a 1. 5
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million
as the
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stabiled
at this situation until was
steadily
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and then backed to 1. 5
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, the tourists who
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

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