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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. rJEo
The table chart illustrates the spending proportion of national consumers in five countries ( Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey) in 2002. Overall, it is apparent that three different categories, food, drinks and tobacco, were more than the other categories. While the least in five counties were leisure and education parts, comparing to clothing and footwear department had three same percentages of Ireland, Spain and Turkey. From the given data, it can be seen that Ireland, Spain and Turkey ( where are the highest amount of expenditures) spend the most of food, drinks and tobacco in turkey and clothing and footwear in this country, Turkey. This had about 32. 14 % in the first one of the category; moreover, leisure and education were almost 4. 35%. The following country, Ireland in 2002 had nearly 30%, which is food, drinks, and tobacco. Furthermore, Spain was below 20%, and the same amount of spending in Ireland was under 3%. In comparison, these countries had similarly in clothing and footwear under 7% of them. Moving on to the others, Italy and Sweden have almost similar expenditure in two categories. Clothing and footwear of both had different percentages more or less 4% while food, drinks, and tobacco were significant that had around 16% and 15. 77% as well as 4% of leisure and education.
The table chart illustrates the spending proportion of national consumers in five
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Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey) in 2002.

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, it is apparent that three
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food
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drinks
and
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tobacco
, were more than the other
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. While the least in five counties were leisure and education parts, comparing to clothing and
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footwear
department had three same percentages of Ireland, Spain and Turkey.

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that Ireland, Spain and Turkey
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where are the highest amount of expenditures) spend the most of
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food
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drinks
and
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tobacco
in
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turkey
and clothing and
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footwear
in this
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, Turkey. This had about 32. 14 % in the
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, leisure and education were almost 4. 35%. The following
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, Ireland in 2002 had
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Furthermore
, Spain was below 20%, and the same amount of spending in Ireland was under 3%.
In comparison
, these
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under 7% of them.

Moving on to the others, Italy and Sweden have almost similar expenditure in two
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. Clothing and
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of both had
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percentages more or less 4% while
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food
,
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, and
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were significant that had around 16% and 15. 77%
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as 4% of leisure and education.

IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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