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The graph shows Twitter use by age group in the USA between November 2010 and May 2013.

The graph shows Twitter use by age group in the USA between November 2010 and May 2013. 9POp
The infographic demonstrates the twitter usage by different age groups in the United States of America over a timeframe of two years and seven months. In brief, the trend in the proportion of websites used by young people jumped more than twofold over the past period, in spite of the fact that the app used by elderly generation increased minimally. To begin with, the percentage of people at the age of eighteen to nineteen years old using twitter rose gradually. The amount of the trend kept increasing from fourteen percent in November 2010 and reached a peak once at thirty two percent in August 2012 but accidentally the trend dropped at thirty percent in May 2013 at the end. In comparison with the other line by the group of people at the age of more than sixty five years old, using twitter gained slightly from four percent to five percent over the period.
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age groups in the United States of America over a timeframe of two years and seven months.

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used
by young
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people
jumped more than twofold over the past period,
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the fact that the app
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by elderly generation increased
minimally
.

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with, the percentage of
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people
at the age of eighteen to nineteen years
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old
using twitter rose
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kept
increasing from fourteen
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in November 2010 and reached a peak once at
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thirty two
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in August 2012
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but
accidentally
the trend dropped at thirty
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in May 2013 at the
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end
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people
at the age of more than
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sixty five
years
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, using twitter gained
slightly
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to five
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over the period.

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