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Recycling of wasted bottles

Recycling of wasted bottles 1lOW

The presented diagram below demonstrates the process of wasted glass bottles and delivered back to the supermarket. Overall, there are available three levels of recycling process, commencing with contributing wasted glass jars to the collection point and finishing with delivering the goods back to the store for selling. Initially, in the first stage, the abandoned glass bottles are collected to the collection point and they are deposited by transportation, where they have been already loaded into the trucks. The second stage consists of much more steps: firstly, the jars are washed under the high-pressure water for removing from some impurities. Secondly, this bottles are separated to three colours namely: clear, green and brown bottles. Thirdly, the washed bitta jars are handed to the glass factory to crush into debris. Moreover, the pieces of glasses are burned in the furnace under the heating, between 600° and 800° Celsius. After that, the heated up debris is shaped in the glass mould. At the third stage, the recycled bottles are filled with variety of beverage liquid then the products are sent to the department store, ready for sale.

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bottles
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