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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. NobW
The pie charts depict the individual reasons for commuting to work via bicycle and car. Overall, more than half of the people love cycling because of health, fitness and less pollution. However, comfort is the main reason that people give while driving. According to cycling, 60 per cent of people love it because of health, fitness and less pollution. Less than one-fifth of people give the reason as no parking problems. No cost and faster than driving are the two last statements that individuals said when going to work. It comprises of 13 per cent and 1 per cent respectively. Stating further to driving, comfort is the main reason that employers give while going to a job and it made up 40%. 14 per cent of the people like driving because of it is faster than cycling and can easily carry things to work. Nearly a quarter of people give the reason as distance and they can easily go to work through driving. 11 per cent of workers thought that it is safer than cycling when it comes to their woe
The pie charts depict the individual
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reasons
for commuting to
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work
via bicycle and car.

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, more than half of the
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people
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love
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cycling
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because
of health, fitness and less pollution.
However
, comfort is the main
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reason
that
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people
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give
while driving.

According to
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cycling
, 60 per cent of
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people
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love
it
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because
of health, fitness and less pollution. Less than one-fifth of
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people
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give
the
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reason
as no parking problems. No cost and faster than
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driving
are the two last statements that individuals said when going to
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work
. It
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comprises of
13 per cent and 1 per cent
respectively
.

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further
to
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driving
, comfort is the main
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reason
that employers
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give
while going to a job and it made up 40%. 14 per cent of the
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people
like
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driving
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because
of it is faster than
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cycling
and can
easily
carry things to
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work
.
Nearly
a quarter of
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people
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give
the
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reason
as
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distance and
they can
easily
go to
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work
through
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driving
. 11 per cent of workers
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thought
that it is safer than
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cycling
when it
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comes
to their woe
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IELTS academic The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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4 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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