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The graph shows three food products taken in a European country from 1995 to 2001.

The graph shows three food products taken in a European country from 1995 to 2001. m1RkN
The given graph Compares three kinds of meat and fish taken in a certain European country over a period of 25 years. It is clear from the graph that chicken meat was the preferred meat at the end of the given period. it's consumption saw an upward trend with few fluctuations whereas lamp meat which was slightly above chicken declined slowly throughout the stipulated time. However the patronage of fish remained fairly stable over the 25-year period. In the first year, 1979, beef meat was popular among the given products. it was leading the other products with a just over 200 grams per person per week. lamp and chicken followed with 150 and 140 grams per person per week respectively. Fish recorded a little over 50 grams per person per week. beef and lamb meat dipped substantially in 1984 with a figure of 175 and 120 grams per person per week respectively. Lamb meat continued to fall steadily to nearly half of it's initial figure in 1979. However beef meet considerable rised to approximately 200 grams per person per week and then levelled off in 1987 after which it dropped slowly till 2004 with roughly 120 grams per person per week. In contrast chicken meat saw a gradual increase with multiple fluctuations to a peak of 250 grams per person per week before becoming stable in 2004. Finally, the consumption of fish remained relatively stable with a drop of roughly 10grams per person per week.
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given
graph Compares three kinds of
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meat
and fish taken in a certain European country
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over
a period of 25 years.

It is
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clear
from the graph that chicken
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meat
was the preferred
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meat
at the
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end
of the
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given
period.
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it
's consumption
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saw
an upward trend with few fluctuations whereas lamp
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meat
which was
slightly
above chicken declined
slowly
throughout the stipulated time.
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However
the patronage of fish remained
fairly
stable
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over
the 25-year period.

In the
first
year, 1979, beef
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meat
was popular among the
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given
products.
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it
was leading the other products with a
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just
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over
200
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grams
per
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person
per
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week
.
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lamp
and chicken followed with 150 and 140
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grams
per
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person
per
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week
respectively
. Fish recorded a
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little
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over
50
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grams
per
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person
per week.

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beef
and lamb
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meat
dipped
substantially
in 1984 with a figure of 175 and 120
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grams
per
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person
per
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week
respectively
. Lamb
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meat
continued to fall
steadily
to
nearly
half of it's initial figure in 1979.
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However
beef
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meet
considerable
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rised
to approximately 200
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grams
per
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person
per
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week
and then levelled off in 1987 after which it dropped
slowly
till 2004 with roughly 120
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grams
per
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person
per
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week
. In
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contrast
chicken
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meat
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saw
a gradual increase with multiple fluctuations to a peak of 250
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grams
per
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person
per
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week
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before
becoming stable in 2004.
Finally
, the consumption of fish remained
relatively
stable with a drop of roughly
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10grams
per
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person
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week
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows three food products taken in a European country from 1995 to 2001.

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