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The graph shows the spending three kinds of spreads in us from 1981 and 2007.

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The technology is important in our life and developing it irreversible, but sometimes these machinery caused a bad or a good impact in jobs and task. All countries in the world try to depend on automation because it decreases the stress and cost-effective and we can get the best outcome by using the cutting-edge machinery like the 3D printer, if we need to compare the advantage and disadvantage, we couldn’t get any negative point from this equation. Rather than, the old industry, especially traditional don’t have any position in new life because these jobs rarely using in these days, but the craftsmen try to keep their effort and don’t care the new automation or thought to convert to new machinery, particularly when these works depend on their hands such as tailor, taxi drivers and Blacksmiths, all these conventional trials can be replaced by new automation depend on machines or robots. Beside that the men try to get money to livelihood and the one of the reasons don’t think to leave their production.

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important
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but
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sometimes
Did you mean "this machinery" or "these machineries"?this machinerythese machineries
these machinery
 caused a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 or a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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because
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stress
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cost-effective and
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get
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get
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negative
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old
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keep
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thought
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new
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 when these works depend on their hands such as tailor, taxi drivers and Blacksmiths, all these conventional trials can be replaced
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men
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get
 money to livelihood and the one of the reasons don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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leave
 their production. 