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The graph shows the actual and predicted change in employment in the UK, by education level

The graph shows the actual and predicted change in employment in the UK, by education level OVRWy

The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level since 1990 and predicts a trend until 2025. A growth in employment was noted in two educational levels - those with a master’s degree and a bachelor's degree. First, the employment rate of those with a bachelor's degree escalated to 14% in 2000 when it started fluctuating between 8% and 14%. This is expected to continue in the coming years. At the beginning, the rate of employment of those with a master's degree was slower but steadier than the growth rate of bachelor degree employment. However, the situation changed in 2005 when employment of those with a higher education level rapidly escalated and the upward trend has been maintained since then and is expected to continue. On the other hand, job recruitment of people who graduated from high school and those without a school certificate has been steadily dropping since 1990. Nonetheless, the decrease in employment of high school graduates levelled off in 2020 and is expected to remain stable. Overall, the trends show that people with higher education are much more likely to be employed than those with lower education or none at all, and the trend is not likely to change in the future.

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