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Task 1: The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

Task 1: The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now. Ajw2w
The maps illustrate the differences in a small urban between 1995 to now. Overall, in the past, to the northeast of town there were farmland area near forest part section and a hotel, while, to the northwest, there were housing areas and some shops. To the south of town, there was a fishing port, and there was a fish market and café in the west and east, respectively. Over development time, there are many changes such as apartments and car park, but hotel, café and housing remain the same with changes in size. At the present time, farmland and forest park areas had been converted by golf and tennis in the northeast. To the northwest of urban, several homes had been built, and some shops had been replaced some restaurants. To the south of the road, fishing port had been demolished. A fishing market had been reconstructed and became apartments in the west of town, and there is a car park close hotel section opposite a café.
The maps illustrate the differences in a
small
urban between 1995 to
now
.

Overall
, in the past, to the northeast of town there were farmland area near forest part section and a hotel, while, to the northwest, there were housing areas and
some
shops. To the south of town, there was a fishing port, and there was a fish market and café in the west and east,
respectively
. Over development time, there are
many
changes
such as apartments and car park,
but
hotel, café and housing remain the same with
changes
in size.

At the present time, farmland and forest park areas had
been converted
by golf and tennis in the northeast. To the northwest of urban, several homes had
been built
, and
some
shops had
been replaced
some
restaurants. To the south of the road, fishing port had
been demolished
. A fishing market had
been reconstructed
and became apartments in the west of town, and there is a car park close hotel section opposite a café.
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IELTS academic Task 1: The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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