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The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph depicts the government spending on three different sectors since 2001, it also estimates the figures up to 2051. Units are expressed in percentage. it is evident from the graph that expenditure on education were the highest in the initial year compared to other sectors in 2001. Nearly 15% spending recorded for this sector falling slightly to about 14% by 2011. As per prediction, spending on education sector will remain constant till 2051. Incontrast, the money expended on the other two sector showed similar trend till 2012. In the initial 10 years, the money spent on medical care and pension remained stable at 11% and 6% respectively. As per projection, the former is expected to rise slightly in 2021 and then will decline considerably to 4% by the final year. While the latter one is projected to remain static till 2011 then will hit a peak of 18% by 2051 which will become the major expended sector on that year overall, it can be seen that spending on education is forecasted to remain stable but that of health and pension will show opposing trend

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government
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spending
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different
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sectors
 since 2001, it also
 estimates the figures up to 2051. Units are expressed
 in percentage.

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sectors
 in 2001. Nearly
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spending
 recorded for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
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 to about 14% by 2011. As per prediction, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 on education You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 will remain constant till 2051.

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sector
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showed
 similar trend till 2012. In the initial 10 years, the money spent on medical care and pension remained stable at 11% and 6% respectively
. As per projection, the former is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to rise slightly
 in 2021 and then will decline considerably
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While
 the latter one is projected
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overall
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seen
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spending
 on education is forecasted
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but
 that of health and pension will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 opposing trend