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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram of two cutting tools namely, tool A and tool B are shown from the stone age. Tool A is represented from 1. 4 million years ago whereas, Tool B is 0. 8 million year ago. Front view 1, 4 million years ago was more carved and 0. 8 million years ago it was more light in colour and had more width as compared to 1. 4 million years ago. Side view was more in width and darker in color 1. 4 million years back. However, it changed 0. 8 million years back when it became much lesser in the width. Back view of the cutting tools in the stone era was darker in colour 1. 4 million years ago while it was opposite 0. 8 million years back. Moreover, back view of cutting weapon 1. 4 million years ago was less horizontly as compared to 0. 8 million years back. Overall, huge difference can be observed in the cutting tools in all the three views. However, the length of 5cm remained unchanged.
The diagram of two
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cutting
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tools
namely
,
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tool
A and
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tool
B
are shown
from the
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stone age
.
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Tool
A
is represented
from 1. 4
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million
years ago whereas,
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Tool
B is 0. 8
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million
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year
ago.

Front
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view
1, 4
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million
years ago was more carved and 0. 8
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million
years ago it was more
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light in colour
and had more width as compared to 1. 4
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million
years ago. Side
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view
was more in width and
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darker in color
1. 4
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million
years
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back
.
However
, it
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changed
0. 8
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million
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back
when it became much lesser in the width.
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Back
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view
of the
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cutting
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tools
in the stone era was
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darker in colour
1. 4
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million
years ago while it was opposite 0. 8
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million
years
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back
.
Moreover
,
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back
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view
of
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cutting
weapon 1. 4
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million
years ago was less
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horizontly
as compared to 0. 8
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million
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Overall
, huge difference can
be observed
in the
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cutting
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tools
in all the three
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views
.
However
, the length of
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5cm
remained unchanged.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.

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