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The supplied figure presents information about coffee and tea was consumed by australians in different five cities.

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Ovearll, according to the chart, Australians, who lived Sydney, Melbourne and Hobat, they prefered to drink coffe and tea in cafes. On the other hand, they tended to bought instant coffee than fresh coffee. Getting back to the details, coffee users in Melbourne went to cafes in last four weeks and they rate was the most significant rise approximately 64 %. Hobart and Sydney was around at 63% and 61%. If we compare Brisbane and Adelaide, they percentage was considerably low. Brisbane just over a half (51%), and Adelaide just under a half (49%). It can be clearly seen that, the quantity of instant coffee in Hobart was about 54%, Brisbane at over a half (53%), Adelaide exactly a half (50%), the lastly Sydney just over (45%). In addition to this, the percentage of the fresh coffee lovers were below 45% for all shown cities. Boughting fresh coffee the most widespread in Sydney and Melbourne neary 44% and 42%. Next was Hobart roughly 38%. Brisbane and Adelaide's rate was approximately same, just under at 35 %/.
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, according to the chart, Australians, who
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Sydney, Melbourne and
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Hobat
, they
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prefered
to drink
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coffe
and tea in
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cafes
.
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, they tended to
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bought
instant
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than fresh coffee.

Getting back to the
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,
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coffee
users in Melbourne went to
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cafes
in last four
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weeks and
they rate was the most significant rise approximately 64 %. Hobart and Sydney was around at 63% and 61%. If we compare Brisbane and Adelaide,
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they percentage
was
considerably
low. Brisbane
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over a
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(51%), and Adelaide
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under a
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half
(49%).

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that, the quantity of instant
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coffee
in Hobart was about 54%, Brisbane at over a
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(53%), Adelaide exactly a
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(50%), the
lastly
Sydney
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over (45%).

In addition
to this, the percentage of the fresh
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lovers were below 45% for all shown cities.
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fresh
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the most widespread in Sydney and Melbourne
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IELTS academic The supplied figure presents information about coffee and tea was consumed by australians in different five cities.

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