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graphs illustrate global population and urban population

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The line and bar graphs illustrate global population and urban population figures from 1800 to 2100, and the years from 2005 to 2030 respectively in developing and developed regions. Overall, the first graph began at low figure, followed by upwards move and is expected to fall slightly towards the end. In the next one, developed countries population has remained constant, is currently static and is expected to be the same in next decade. On the other hand, developing nations population has been growing and will continue to expand in future. To begin with, the world had about one billion in the year 1800 in the line graph. It grew gradually upto 1950 when population skyrocketed and is still expected to go up towards 9 billion people by 2050 then drop by 2 billion in the end. In the bar graph, developed regions at the beginning had population slighty more than 2 billion, grew by one billion in the year 2020 and is focused that it will be about 4 billion by the year 2030. On the contrary, developed regions has been constant at nearly 1 billion people since 2005 and it remains unchanged for the next decade.
The line and bar
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illustrate global
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population
and urban
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population
figures from 1800 to 2100, and the years from 2005 to 2030
respectively
in developing and
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developed
regions.

Overall
, the
first
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graph
began at low figure, followed by upwards
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move
and is
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expected
to fall
slightly
towards the
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end
. In the
next
one,
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developed
countries
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population
has remained constant, is
currently
static and is
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expected
to be the same in
next
decade.
On the other hand
, developing
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nations
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population
has been growing and will continue to expand
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in future
.

To
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begin
with, the world had about one
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billion
in the
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year
1800 in the line
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graph
. It grew
gradually
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upto
1950 when
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population
skyrocketed and is
still
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expected
to go up towards 9
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billion
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people
by 2050 then drop by 2
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billion
in the
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end
.

In the bar
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,
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developed
regions at the beginning had
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population
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slighty
more than 2
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billion
, grew by one
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billion
in the
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year
2020 and
is focused
that it will be about 4
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billion
by the
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year
2030.
On the contrary
,
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developed
regions has been constant at
nearly
1
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billion
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people
since 2005 and it remains unchanged for the
next
decade.

IELTS academic graphs illustrate global population and urban population

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6.0
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