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The graph shows the records for the number of cyclists and their cycling purpose in 2018, 2019,2020,2021

The graph shows the records for the number of cyclists and their cycling purpose in 2018, 2019, 2020, 2021 WgEwb
The graph shows the records for the number of cyclists and their cycling purpose in 2018, 2019, 2020, 2021. The ratio of men and women riding bicycles in the town is not equal. In 2018, the proportion of men riding bicycles was 30 percent higher than that of women. In 2019, the percentage of men cycling decreased by 10 percent and the percentage of women cycling increased by nearly 30 percent. In 2020 and 2021 the rate of cycling for both women and men will increase. In which, by 2021, the proportion of men riding bicycles will increase to nearly 60 percent and women to 50 percent. The town's annual bike ride is for fun and for added benefits. In 2018, the population cycling for recreation was 40 percent more than cycling for utility. In 2019, people biking for utility increased by 40 percent and cycling for recreation fell to 30 percent. In 2020, 2021, the percentage of cycling for leisure and utility both increases. In 2021, the rate of cycling for recreation increased to a peak of 70 percent and the rate of cycling for convenience decreased compared to 2020 by nearly 10 percent. In 2021 people in the town all love to ride bicycles and they have more time to enjoy themselves by cycling.
The graph
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the records for the number of cyclists and their
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cycling
purpose in 2018, 2019, 2020, 2021.

The ratio of
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men
and
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women
riding
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bicycles
in the town is not equal. In 2018, the proportion of
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men
riding
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bicycles
was 30
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percent
higher than that of
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women
. In 2019, the percentage of
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men
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cycling
decreased by 10
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percent
and the percentage of
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women
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cycling
increased by
nearly
30
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percent
.
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In
2020 and 2021 the rate of
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cycling
for both
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women
and
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men
will increase.
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In
which, by 2021, the proportion of
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men
riding
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bicycles
will increase to
nearly
60
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percent
and
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women
to 50 percent.

The town's annual bike ride is for fun and for
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added
benefits. In 2018, the population
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cycling
for recreation was 40
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percent
more than
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cycling
for utility. In 2019,
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people
biking for utility increased by 40
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percent
and
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cycling
for recreation fell to 30
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percent
.
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In
2020, 2021, the percentage of
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cycling
for leisure and utility both increases.
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In
2021, the rate of
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cycling
for recreation increased to a peak of 70
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percent
and the rate of
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cycling
for convenience decreased compared to 2020 by
nearly
10 percent.

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In
2021
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people
in the town all
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love
to ride
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bicycles and
they have more time to enjoy themselves by
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cycling
.
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