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THE GRAPH SHOWS THE REASONS FOR LAND DEGRADATION

THE GRAPH SHOWS THE REASONS FOR LAND DEGRADATION D21am

The circular chart highlights the important reason of why productive land is becoming less fertile. As per the data we can get to the causes of worldwide land degradation and by the regions too. As the data illustrates that there are three main reason and cause of worldwide land degradation. Overgrazing done by animals iis more affecting and its increasing by leaps and bound. Overgrazing is maximum cause for land degradation. Its more in amount compare to others. After that as we all know deforestation is gradually increasing. So this also play important role in it. Deforestation is at 30%. Over cultivation done by farmer this also make a major loss to farmer and the land become less productive. This can lead to a major damage. These were the main reasons other reason are not that major. As per the tabular data, Europe was having maximum problem and a large amount of sum in land degradation. In Europe deforestation took more place. After this oceania was the region where overgrazing was done more at it consists of 13% of land degraded. In North America it was the lowest (5%) and its because of over cultivation is done more. By this you can get some brief idea about the main reason and causes of land degradation.

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