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The line graph shows the number of bananas imported to four countries in the year 1996 and 2004

The line graph shows the number of bananas imported to four countries in the year 1996 and 2004 756yy

The line chart details the total import figures in USD per kg for bananas to four countries from the year 1996 to 2004. In general, it is readily apparent that the USA imported by far the least despite a small upwards trend, while Japan (in decline) imported the most. Besides, France was stable overall and tied for most imports by the end and Germany rose marginally. At the beginning of the period, the price of bananas were 2 USD per kilogram in both Japan and France. Although the cost in Japan soared to around 3 USD and reaching a record high. In contrast, banana sales in France were similar to the beginning of the year and it fell to 1. 5 USD in 1999. After that banana prices fluctuated in both countries. At the end of the period, the sale of bananas was 2. 5 USD and 2 USD respectively. Furthermore, compared to Germany and the United States in the year 1966, the price of bananas was 1. 5 USD and 1 USD and then Germany ‌ was slightly higher. Moreover, the cost of bananas alternated sharply until 1999 and by 2002 it ended up around 2 USD and around 1. 75 USD in Germany. On the other hand, banana prices rose to an estimated 1. 25 USD per kg in 1998. Consequently, the price went up and down just below 1. 5 USD per kg.

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