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The giving pia chart illustrates the different modes of getting the news in canada and australia.

The giving pia chart illustrates the different modes of getting the news in canada and australia. 5b1ND
Overall, it can be evident that online source of accessing the news in australia nation while, in canada, everyone had preferred television for news. As per the circular chart, particularly in canada, there were approximately more than forty percent people who were watching the television for getting the news, whereas around 37 proportion of masses who used that mode in Australia. Through the radio medium, about least amount of canadian listened radio, who was seven ration, however in Australia, there were tiny fraction individuals, who heared it. As per the remaining information in canada, there were about small fraction people, who had little bit interested in printing newspaper rather than citizens of Australia. Surprisingly, over tiny fraction canadian were getting news instead of using these medium.
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, it can be evident that online source of accessing the news in
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nation while, in
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canada
, everyone had preferred television for news.

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in
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canada
, there were approximately more than forty percent
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were watching the television for getting the news, whereas around 37 proportion of masses
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used
that mode in Australia. Through the radio medium, about
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least
amount of
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canadian
listened radio,
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who
was seven ration,
however
in Australia, there were tiny fraction individuals,
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who
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it.

As per the remaining information in
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, there were about
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fraction
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,
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had
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little bit
interested in printing newspaper
rather
than citizens of Australia.
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, over tiny fraction
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canadian
were getting news
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of using these medium.
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IELTS academic The giving pia chart illustrates the different modes of getting the news in canada and australia.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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