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The following graph shows the qmount of railway trafficthe no of paaengers of weight in the yeqr 2001-2002 to 2011-2012

The following graph shows the qmount of railway trafficthe no of paaengers of weight in the yeqr 2001-2002 to 2011-2012 661kr
The bar graph shows tge amount of railway traffic-the passengers travelled abd the goods carried-from 2002-2003 to 2011-2012. The horizontal axis represents the time period, the vertical axis depicts the number of travelling passengers in millions and the goods carried in million tonnes. It is seen that in the inutial years, from2002 to 2003, the railways carried nearly 3, 800 millions passengers and approximately 300 million tonnes of goods. By the year 2011-2012, after a gap of 10 years, this traffic had increased to nearly 5, 000million passengers qnd 500 million tonnes of good carried. There is a steady increaee in the load carried, though tge increase in only incremental.
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IELTS academic The following graph shows the qmount of railway trafficthe no of paaengers of weight in the yeqr 2001-2002 to 2011-2012

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