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The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the united kingdom in time period of 1974 and 2002.

The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the united kingdom in time period of 1974 and 2002. 9l0B7
The graph illustrates the quantities of goods transported in the united kingdom by four different modes of transport between the time period of 1974 and 2002. Over this span of 28 years, the quantities of goods transported by road, water and pipeline have all increased while the quantity transported by rail has remained almost constant at about 40 million tonnes. The largest quantity of goods transported both in 1974 and 2002 was by road ( 70 million tonnes and 98 million tonnes respectively) while the lowest both in 1974 and 2002 was by pipeline (about 5 million tonnes and 22 million tonnes respectively ). The amount of goods transported by water was constant from 1974 to 1978, where it showed an exponential growth, rising to almost 60 million tonnes after which it plateaued for about 20 years before starting to rise gradually again. The amount of goods transported by rail is almost constant at 40 million tonnes in 1974 and 2002, with decreases in quantity in between the years. It is also interesting to note that almost all showed a decrease in 1994 in amount of goods transported except for the pipeline, which actually peaked in that year. Overall, the road remains the most popular method of transporting goods in the UK while water and pipelines are becoming increasingly used, have not become more popular as a method of transport.
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transported by road, water and pipeline have all increased while the
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transported by rail has remained
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The largest
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transported both in 1974 and 2002 was by road
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. The amount of
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transported by water was constant from 1974 to 1978, where it
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an exponential growth, rising to
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60
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, have not become more popular as a method of transport.
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