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The line graph compares the rank of manufacturing 3 different types of fuels namely petroleum, coal and natural gas in Europe's country between 1981 and 2000. It is clear that, there was a remarkable increase in tonnes of petroleum and natural gas produced, while the level of coal tended to decline significantly. Petroleum was the fuel that had the highest rank of all throughout the period shown. In 1981, nearly 100 tonnes of petroleum was manufactured in this European country. The amount of coal was lower than petroleum at 80 tonnes. The country just produced about 40 tonnes of natural gas this year. Over 7 years following, there was a steady fluctuation in the figure for petroleum output then it went down slightly in 1992, representing around 95 tonnes. However, by 2000, the rank of manufacturing petroleum reached its peak with the figure above 120 tonnes. In the year 1985, just around 50 tonnes of coal was produced by this country, this figure was much lower compared to 1981. By contrast, it tended to rise gradually 2 years later. Over the period shown from 1987 to 2000, the amount of coal manufactured reduced constantly to approximately 40 tonnes - the lowest number of 3 main fuels in 2000. The period from 1981 to 1994 saw a stabilization in a number of tonnes of natural gas output. Though, there was a big change that the country produced this fuel a lot in 2000 with over 80 tonnes of natural gas. This figure was 2 times higher than in 1981.
The line graph compares the rank of manufacturing 3
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fuels
namely
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petroleum
, coal and
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natural
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gas
in Europe's
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country
between 1981 and 2000.

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that, there was a remarkable increase in tonnes of
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petroleum
and
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natural
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gas
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produced
, while the level of coal tended to decline
significantly
.
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Petroleum
was the
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fuel
that had the highest rank of all throughout the period shown.

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nearly
100 tonnes of
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petroleum
was manufactured
in this European
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country
. The amount of coal was lower than
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petroleum
at 80 tonnes. The
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country
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just
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produced
about 40 tonnes of
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natural
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gas
this
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year
. Over 7 years following, there was a steady fluctuation in the
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figure
for
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petroleum
output then it went down
slightly
in 1992, representing around 95 tonnes.
However
, by 2000, the rank of manufacturing
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petroleum
reached its peak with the
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figure
above 120 tonnes.

In the
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year
1985,
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around 50 tonnes of coal was
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by this
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, this
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was much lower compared to 1981. By contrast, it tended to rise
gradually
2 years later. Over the period shown from 1987 to 2000, the amount of coal manufactured
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reduced
constantly
to approximately 40 tonnes
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the lowest number of 3 main
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fuels
in 2000. The period from 1981 to 1994
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saw
a stabilization in a number of tonnes of
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natural
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gas
output.
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, there was a
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big
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that the
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country
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produced
this
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fuel
a lot in 2000 with over 80 tonnes of
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natural
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gas
. This
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figure
was 2 times higher than in 1981.
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