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The chart below shows the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the relevant.

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The figure shows the estimated world illiteracy rate by region, by gender of the year 2000. This figure was presented by the graphical presentation and was categorized into six regions as developed countries, Latin America/ Caribbean, East Asia/ Oceania, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states, and South Asia. The figures also represent the illiteracy in all regions by gender and will show the difference between males and females. According to the presented data. Developed countries have a very low illiteracy rate when it is compared to other regions specifically South Asia, Arab States, and Sub-Saharan Africa where the illiteracy rate is way too high. In Summary, the presented figures of world illiteracy rate were categorized by regions through data observation. The illiteracy rate amongst females is higher when compared to the male illiteracy rate.
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regions
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South Asia, Arab States, and Sub-Saharan Africa where the
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is way too high.

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of world
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were categorized
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amongst females is higher when compared to the male
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender

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