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Table shows the size of west farm and value of land per dollar from 1900 to 1990

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The given table illustrates the information about the size of west farm and value of land per dollar in between the years 1900 and 1990Overall, it is clearly seen that maximum value of dollars in 1970 but minimum in 1925Firstly, in the year 1900 and 1925 the value of the land was 2 heatarea and dollars were 8 millions and 1 million respectively. Moreover after 15 years the size of west farm increased by 3 hectares as compared to 1925In addition, the maximum changes in 1970 and it was 56 hectares and value was 50 dollars. On the other hand in the year 1990 it was decreased by 18 hectares and also it had litte change in dollars which was 2 dollars
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in between the years 1900 and 1990Overall, it is
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1900 and 1925 the
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were 8 millions and 1 million
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after 15 years the size of west farm increased by 3 hectares as compared to 1925In addition, the maximum
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in 1970 and it was 56 hectares and
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was 50
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1990 it
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IELTS academic Table shows the size of west farm and value of land per dollar from 1900 to 1990

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