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The graph shows the private debt and credit in the UK since 1880. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given graph illustrates the information on the private dept and credit in UK over a period of consecutive years. It is clearly evident from the statistics that the dept was initially stable but over a period there is a drastic increase and a slight fall of GDP percent during the end of the year 2020. The credit gained during the entire scale of the period havent crossed GDP of 20 percent and never went down under -10 percent of GDP. This is maintained consistently with no more of ups and downs. On the other hand the private depts made in the country was consistent until 1912 and there is a sudden fall almost untill 1920. There is a drift again in 1920 to 1940.

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IELTS academic The graph shows the private debt and credit in the UK since 1880.

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American English

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