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the graph below shows the number of complaints made out about noise to environment health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996

the graph below shows the number of complaints made out about noise to environment health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996 Kwo2w
The graph illustrates the information about the four different noise related complaints that Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown received from 1990 to 1996. Overall, the complaints related to domestic and household, traffic noise and factories increased over time except for road work. The number of complaints of Road work initially was the highest but became the least at the end of the period. In 1980, the authorities had the least complaints about traffic noise, around 300 complaints while the figure of road works was nearly three time more than traffic noise, at approximately 620. The data of domestic and household was the second highest while the complaint related to factories was slightly less than domestic and household, roughly 400 and 500 respectively. From 1988 to 1996, the data of domestic and household experienced a drastic rise from 400 to slightly above 1200 and became the main complaint in 1996. Similarly, the number of traffic noise complaints rose more than threefold from 200 to 600. On the contrary, the figure of road work showed dramatically drop and became the least in 1996, around 100 complaints. The data of factories remained stable at roughly 700 complaints throughout the period.
The graph illustrates the information about the four
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noise
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that Environmental Health authorities in the city of
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Newtown
received from 1990 to 1996.

Overall
, the
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complaints
related to
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domestic
and
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household
,
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traffic
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noise
and factories increased over time
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except for
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road
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work
. The number of
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complaints
of
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Road
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work
initially
was the highest
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but
became the least at the
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end
of the period.

In 1980, the authorities had the least
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complaints
about
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traffic
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noise
, around 300
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complaints
while the figure of
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road
works was
nearly
three time more than
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traffic
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noise
, at approximately 620. The data of
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domestic
and
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household
was the second highest while the
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complaint
related to factories was
slightly
less than
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domestic
and
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household
, roughly 400 and 500
respectively
.

From 1988 to 1996, the data of
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domestic
and
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household
experienced a drastic rise from 400 to
slightly
above 1200 and became the main
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complaint
in 1996.
Similarly
, the number of
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traffic
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noise
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complaints
rose more than threefold from 200 to 600.

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, the figure of
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road
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work
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showed
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drop and became the least in 1996, around 100
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complaints
. The data of factories remained stable at roughly 700
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complaints
throughout the period.
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