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The graph shows average rainfall and temperatures typically experienced in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average rainfall and temperatures typically experienced in London. Wyobk
The bar graph demonstrates the temperatures and rainfall during an year that the country London has experienced. It can be observed from the graph that the average daily maximum temperature and minimum temperature were raised till mid of the year and than the gradually got decreased by end of the year. During the month of January the rains were almost high and then steadily decreasing untill the month of April. Then there was a sudden raise in the rains till the month of November which is being the highest (65) though there was a slight decrease in between that is on the month of September (50). The average maximum and minimum temperatures were reported high (above 20 degree celcius) during the months June, July and August. In contrast the average maximum and minimum temperatures were very low during the begining and the end of the year (below 10 degree celcius).
The bar graph demonstrates the
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year that the country London has experienced. It can
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from the graph that the average daily maximum
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temperature
and minimum
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temperature
were raised
till mid of the year and
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end
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During the
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of January the rains were almost high and then
steadily
decreasing
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untill
the
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month
of April. Then there was a sudden raise in the rains till the
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month
of November which is being the highest (65) though there was a slight decrease in between
that is
on the
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month
of September (50).

The average maximum and minimum
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temperatures
were reported
high (above 20 degree
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celcius
) during the
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June, July and August. In
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the average maximum and minimum
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temperatures
were
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low during the
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begining
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celcius
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IELTS academic The graph shows average rainfall and temperatures typically experienced in London.

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