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The graph shows average rainfall and temperatures typically experienced in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph demonstrates the temperatures and rainfall during an year that the country London has experienced. It can be observed from the graph that the average daily maximum temperature and minimum temperature were raised till mid of the year and than the gradually got decreased by end of the year. During the month of January the rains were almost high and then steadily decreasing untill the month of April. Then there was a sudden raise in the rains till the month of November which is being the highest (65) though there was a slight decrease in between that is on the month of September (50). The average maximum and minimum temperatures were reported high (above 20 degree celcius) during the months June, July and August. In contrast the average maximum and minimum temperatures were very low during the begining and the end of the year (below 10 degree celcius).

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 year that the country London has experienced. It can be observed
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temperature
 and minimum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
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were raised
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than
 the gradually
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got
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end
 of the year.

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month
 of January the rains were almost high and then steadily
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 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 of April. Then there was a sudden raise in the rains till the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 of November which is being the highest (65) though there was a slight decrease in between that is
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 of September (50).

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temperatures
were reported
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celcius
) during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
months
 June, July and August. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?contrast,
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temperatures
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very
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begining
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). 