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The chart below gives information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the martial status of adult Americans in two of the years

The chart below gives information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the martial status of adult Americans in two of the years n6bw7
The first chart depicts the rate of marriages and divorces of adult from 1970 to 2000while other chart illustrates the marital status of men and women in year year 1970 and 2000 in the USA. Overall, number of marriages were more in those years compared to divorces and in second bar chartthe percentage of married people were more compared with other status. In 1970and in 1980, 2. 5 millions marriage had happened whereas in 1990 and 2000, it was (around 2. 3 millions and 2 millions respectively). There was around same number of divorces happened in 1970, 1990 and year 2000 on this as opposed to nearly 1. 4 millions divorces were happened in year 1980. In 1970, 70% of individuals were married and in 2000, it was just over 59% which was higher than that of all the status. The ones who never married in 2000 were approximately 20% which was higher than the year 1970 around 15%. In addition, widowed humans and divorced were less than 10% in both the years.
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of adult from 1970 to 2000while other chart illustrates the marital status of
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men
and women in
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year
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1970 and 2000 in the USA.
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, number of marriages were more in those years compared to
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divorces
and in second bar
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percentage of married
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people
were more compared with other status. In 1970and in 1980, 2. 5
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marriage had happened whereas in 1990 and 2000, it was (around 2. 3
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millions
and 2
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millions
respectively
). There was around same number of
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divorces
happened in 1970, 1990 and
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2000 on this as opposed to
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1. 4
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millions
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divorces
were happened
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1980. In 1970, 70% of individuals
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and in 2000, it was
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over 59% which was higher than that of all the status. The ones who never married in 2000 were approximately 20% which was higher than the
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year
1970 around 15%.
In addition
, widowed humans and divorced were less than 10% in both the years.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the martial status of adult Americans in two of the years

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