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The graph shows the population of three countries in 1950 and 2000 (in millions) and their projected population figures for 2050.

The graph shows the population of three countries in 1950 and 2000 (in millions) and their projected population figures for 2050. pKJ1y
The data provides information about the population and life expectancy figures between 1950 and 2000 (in millions) in three different countries and the estimates for 2050. As can be seen from the graph, China and the USA presented an increase in the growth of population which is expected to continue. China's population grew significantly from 700 to 1200 million over a fifty-year period and is forecast to reach 1500 million in 2050, while Spain's figures show a different picture, which slightly increased 10 million in the period from 1950 to 2000 and is projected to marginally declined to 35 million in 2050. The USA's population rose from 200 million in 1950 to 300 million in 2000 and is expected to gain 400 million in 2050.
The data provides information about the
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population
and life expectancy figures between 1950 and 2000 (in
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millions)
in three
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different
countries and the estimates for 2050.

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seen
from the graph, China and the USA presented an increase in the growth of
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population
which is
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expected
to continue. China's
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population
grew
significantly
from 700 to 1200
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million
over a fifty-year period and is forecast to reach 1500
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million
in 2050, while Spain's figures
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show
a
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picture, which
slightly
increased 10
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million
in the period from 1950 to 2000 and
is projected
to
marginally
declined to 35
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million
in 2050. The USA's
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population
rose from 200
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million
in 1950 to 300
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million
in 2000 and is
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expected
to gain 400
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million
in 2050.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the population of three countries in 1950 and 2000 (in millions) and their projected population figures for 2050.

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