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The graph shows the population of Canada and the USA's most populous states.

The graph shows the population of Canada and the USA's most populous states. DwmGp

The line chart illustrates Canada and United state populous states (California and Texas) population during six decades from 1920 to 2010. According to the data shown, in 1920 and 1930 the population in California and Texas have some similarity with around five million residents which then California exceed Taxes residents in 1940. The population in Canada was about 10, 000, 000 residents in the same period then an obvious increased occurred and the population became over the ten million. From 1940 to 1970 all the mentioned countries population have grown constantly, however, the number of California and Canada residents have intersected in 1985 with approximately 25 million. The population growing were stabled in the next decades until 2010 with 25, 000, 000, about 35, 000, 00 and around37, 000, 000 in Texas, Canada and California respectively. Overall, it was clear that all nation faced an obvious growth in their population, however California was the populous states in the last three decades of the mentioned period.

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