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The graph shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.

The graph shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012. oYVV
The line chart illustrates information about the population of various species of turtles between 1980 and 2012. As can be seen, all types of turtles stood at same proportion in the beginning, in the end of given period Olive Ridely turtles peaked the highest proportion of the turtles. Looking at the details, as regards Leatherbaxk turtles, it stood at around 100 in 1980 and soared about 135 turtles in 1996, following this during the period given fluctuating marginally and remaining at 130. If took at the Green turtles and all species, than they started with 100 and experienced a marginal fluctuation, despite fluctuating, in 2012 they reached at about 105 and 90 respectively. By contrast, the amounts of Olive Ridely turtles went in the opposite direction, in 1980 it stood at 100, an experienced a slight increase reaching 110 in 1987. Despite having this proportion, the quality Oscillated slightly and plummeted to a low at about 53 in 2012.
The line chart illustrates information about the population of various species of
turtles
between 1980 and 2012. As can be
seen
, all types of
turtles
stood at same proportion in the beginning, in the
end
of
given
period Olive
Ridely
turtles
peaked the highest proportion of the
turtles
. Looking at the
details
, as regards
Leatherbaxk
turtles
, it stood at around 100 in 1980 and soared about 135
turtles
in 1996, following this during the period
given
fluctuating
marginally
and remaining at 130. If took at the Green
turtles
and all species,
than
they
started
with 100 and experienced a marginal fluctuation, despite fluctuating, in 2012 they reached at about 105 and 90
respectively
. By contrast, the amounts of Olive
Ridely
turtles
went in the opposite direction, in 1980 it stood at 100, an experienced a slight increase reaching 110 in 1987. Despite having this proportion, the quality Oscillated
slightly
and plummeted to a low at about 53 in 2012.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.

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