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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of United Kingdom teenagers who are taking vegan food from 1960 to 2020, with a difference of a decade in between. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that it showed an increase, decrease, and fluctuations over the period shown. In 1960, there was not any youngster who was vegetarian. Then, it increased rapidly till 1980 and reached about 15%. After this, the ratio decreased speedily and witnessed at about 5% in 1990. Next, it fluctuated between 1990 and 2000. Before fluctuation from 2010 to 2020, it rose significantly. At the end of the period, it maintained at around 10%.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of United Kingdom
teenagers
who are taking vegan food from 1960 to 2020, with a difference of a decade in between. It
is measured
in percentages.

Overall
, it is
clear
that it
showed
an increase, decrease, and fluctuations over the period shown.

In 1960, there was not any youngster who was vegetarian. Then, it increased
rapidly
till 1980 and reached about 15%. After this, the ratio decreased
speedily
and witnessed at about 5% in 1990.
Next
, it fluctuated between 1990 and 2000.
Before
fluctuation from 2010 to 2020, it rose
significantly
. At the
end
of the period, it maintained at around 10%.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.

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  American English
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108 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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