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The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.

This bar chart demonstrate the rate of population in India, China, USA, and japan in 1950, 2002, and foresee of 2050. It is intelligible from the graph that China reached the highest proportion of population with 23% in 1950. According to what is illustrates, China decreased after 50 years approximately and the bar chart expect that it will be dropped to hit 15% in 2025. While the rate of population in Japan was under 5% in 1950, 2002, and 2050, followed by the USA which testified the higher population in 1950 and maintain stable in 2002 and 2050. While India increase gradually from 15% in 1950 to expect that it is going to be 18% after 100 years. To sum up we could say that the maximum proportion of population in 2050 will exist in India, however the lowest rate will exist in Japan nearly by 1%.
This bar chart demonstrate the rate of
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in India, China, USA, and
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japan
in 1950, 2002, and foresee of 2050. It is intelligible from the graph that China reached the highest proportion of
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population
with 23% in 1950. According to what is illustrates, China decreased after 50 years approximately and the bar chart
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expect
that it will
be dropped
to hit 15% in 2025. While the rate of
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population
in Japan was under 5% in 1950, 2002, and 2050, followed by the USA which testified the higher
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population
in 1950 and maintain stable in 2002 and 2050. While India increase
gradually
from 15% in 1950 to
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expect
that it is going to be 18% after 100 years. To sum up we could say that the maximum proportion of
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population
in 2050 will exist in India,
however
the lowest rate will exist in Japan
nearly
by 1%.
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IELTS academic The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.

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