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The graph shows the percentage of male and female Academic Staff members across the faculties of major university in 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female Academic Staff members across the faculties of major university in 2012. 5g3D
The bar chart illustrate the percentage of men and women staff members for academics over the faculties of a major university in the year 2012. Overall, the chart is fluctuated for both of them(men as well as women). Although, in the engineering males are at the high position then females. Whereas, in the education sector women have more members. In 2012, a major university have 59% female members, however male is only 43%. In the business compartment we can see a large difference of number where female are less than males which is 39% and 65% respectively. Education had opposite trend. There are less men vis-a-vis women. Engineering had most of the male people with 84% while, female were only 19%. Law stream had more male components then female with 60% and 40%. However, medicine department had more female with 56 percentage. Science had second highest number of male which is 65%.
The bar chart illustrate the percentage of
men
and
women
staff members for academics over the faculties of a major university in the year 2012.
Overall
, the chart
is fluctuated
for both of them(
men
as well as
women)
.
Although
, in the engineering
males
are at the high position then
females
.
Whereas
, in the education sector
women
have more members. In 2012, a major university have 59%
female
members,
however
male is
only
43%. In the business compartment we can
see
a large difference of number where
female
are less than
males
which is 39% and 65%
respectively
. Education had opposite trend. There are
less
men
vis-a-vis
women
. Engineering had most of the male
people
with 84% while,
female
were
only
19%. Law stream had more male components
then
female
with 60% and 40%.
However
, medicine department had more
female
with 56 percentage. Science had second highest number of male which is 65%.
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