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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 67Nr

The presented diagram below illustrates the procedure on manufacturing instant noodles. Moreover, we can notice that, there are step by step procedures that were followed strictly to produce noodles. To begin with, Flour was stored to a two huge storage silos. These flour was mix with water and oil and delivered to a mixer. Furthermore, there was a roller under the mixer that being used to make these concoctions turned into a dough sheets. Additionally, a machine was used to transform these dough sheets to become a strip. At this moment, noodles turn out to be a disc shape which is the basic size of a noodles. After frying using oil and dry by batch, the next step would be putting these noodles inside of the cups individually and adding some vegetables and spices according to their flavors. Lastly, Labelling and sealing took the last part which is crucial of each item before thsed product will be delivered to supermarkets To sum up, instant noodles was manufactured using a time line and it needed a considerable efforst to make each product individually produced.

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noodles
. Moreover
, we can notice that, there are Did you mean the adjective or adverb "step-by-step" (spelled with hyphens)?step-by-step
step by step
 procedures that were followed
strictly
 to produce noodles.

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begin
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make
 these concoctions turned into a dough sheets. Additionally
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used
 to transform these dough sheets to become a strip. At this moment, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 turn out to be a disc shape which is the basic size of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
. After frying using oil and dry by batch, the next
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noodles
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inside of
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some
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, Labelling and sealing took the last part which is crucial of each item This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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 product will be delivered
 to supermarkets

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noodles
was manufactured
 using a time line and it needed a considerable Possible spelling mistake found.effortseffort
efforst
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make
 each product individually
 produced. 